Ghost

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 29-Jun-2005 18:58:37

Can you not see


that something is wrong?


I'm but a pale, thin shadow;


my heart is long gone.


I just float around freely


like I don't give a damn,


but oh, you don't know me;


that's not how I am.


My eyes are pools of nothingness


into which you can see,


but you can't see my insides;


you just see right through me.


It's like I'm a ghost,


like I'm barely alive,


like I'm turning into dust


since my heart died.

Post 2 by louiano (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Wednesday, 29-Jun-2005 21:28:41

aww, that was good

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Thursday, 30-Jun-2005 11:13:31

Bravissima!

Post 4 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 4:27:43

Wow it is great!!!!!!! I felt like it once. Great!!!